"What are you doing for lunch on Wednesday the 8th?"
"What are you doing for lunch on Wednesday the 8th?"
I received an envelope with this message printed near my
name and address:
"What are you doing for lunch on Wednesday the 8th?"
Of course I opened the envelope.
I knew I wouldn't be in Houston on the 8th, but I
was curious about what I would be missing.
I opened the envelope. This was a great first
sentence or headline that prompted me to action.
This would have been effective as the subject line
of an e-mail or a message left on voice mail.
The point?
If we say the right things, prospects jump to
action. Are you saying the right things to get
your prospects to respond?
That's why I am a student of great first sentences
and headlines.
Want an easy way to create your own great first
sentences and headlines? Simply go to:
http://www.mlmlessons.com/headlines
And make sure to check out my five all-time favorite
first sentences. They are in the yellow box.
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Tom Big Al Schreiter is the author of the Fortune Now
Newsletter, a generic training resource for professional
network marketing leaders. If you'd like to read some
free back issues, go to http://www.fortunenow.com or
get the current issue free by calling 281-280-9800.
Big Al and Art Jonak's powerpack manual is also available
at http://powerpack.mlmlessons.com
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I received an envelope with this message printed near my
name and address:
"What are you doing for lunch on Wednesday the 8th?"
Of course I opened the envelope.
I knew I wouldn't be in Houston on the 8th, but I
was curious about what I would be missing.
I opened the envelope. This was a great first
sentence or headline that prompted me to action.
This would have been effective as the subject line
of an e-mail or a message left on voice mail.
The point?
If we say the right things, prospects jump to
action. Are you saying the right things to get
your prospects to respond?
That's why I am a student of great first sentences
and headlines.
Want an easy way to create your own great first
sentences and headlines? Simply go to:
http://www.mlmlessons.com/headlines
And make sure to check out my five all-time favorite
first sentences. They are in the yellow box.
==============================================
Tom Big Al Schreiter is the author of the Fortune Now
Newsletter, a generic training resource for professional
network marketing leaders. If you'd like to read some
free back issues, go to http://www.fortunenow.com or
get the current issue free by calling 281-280-9800.
Big Al and Art Jonak's powerpack manual is also available
at http://powerpack.mlmlessons.com
==============================================
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